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The bar graph illustrates the problems of the residents from 7 different regions in the United Kindom. It covers 3 diversed areas such as service related to health; training or educational services, and pollution of air across the cities.

The bar graph illustrates the problems of the residents from 7 different regions in the United Kindom. It covers 3 diversed areas such as service related to health; training or educational services, and pollution of air across the cities. 0Eqw5
Overall, most cities had reported on sectors of healthcare and it was followed by edcuation and training issues. In the opposite end, air pollution was the least complaining facts in these areas. Starting from London to New castle (at the top of the chart), in association with health related reports were mostly over 50% of the population with the highest rate on Belfast. However, there was a relatively lowest numbers of reported cases on health services in Glasgow, which was just less than half of the habitants. In view of edcation and training, there were more or less the same higher complaints (moe than half of the population) with some fewer issues in Manchester and Newcastle (just around 45% or above). By and large, there were fewer problems with air pollution in most regions although some higher rates in Manchester (about 15%) and London (about 13%). In this case, Nwecastle had the least complaint people about the issue.
Overall
, most cities had reported on sectors of healthcare and it
was followed
by
edcuation
and training issues. In the opposite
end
, air pollution was the least complaining facts in these areas.

Starting from London to New castle (at the top of the chart), in association with health related reports were
mostly
over 50% of the population with the highest rate on Belfast.
However
, there was a
relatively
lowest
numbers of reported cases on health services in Glasgow, which was
just
less than half of the habitants. In view of
edcation
and training, there were more or less the same higher complaints (
moe
than half of the population) with
some
fewer issues in Manchester and Newcastle (
just
around 45% or above).

By and large, there were fewer problems with air pollution in most regions although
some
higher rates in Manchester (about 15%) and London (about 13%).
In this case
,
Nwecastle
had the least complaint
people
about the issue.
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates the problems of the residents from 7 different regions in the United Kindom. It covers 3 diversed areas such as service related to health; training or educational services, and pollution of air across the cities.

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