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The provided maps illustrate the changes in Castellon city in the Spanish from 2000 till now

The provided maps illustrate the changes in Castellon city in the Spanish from 2000 till now rGm56
The provided maps illustrate the changes in Castellon city in the Spanish from 2000 till now As an overview, it can be seen that there are slight changes with lots of new commercial buildings had been built surround the city center. Moreover, alongside the port, entertainment places were added during the period. The city center has remained and was opened up bike rental scheme. From the city center to the university, there is a tramline and a new station which has been replaced. A road for the vehicle is changed into the road for pedestrians only and next to the road is the port which still exists. Furthermore, cinema, bars, and clubs are erected on the left side. A noticeable change is that more shopping places have been built around the city center. On the east side, there are a new shopping center, airport, and new market. The old market was demolished to make a new way for a tall new shop building. In addition, the old train station is renovated by a police station which nearby the hall for residents to live.
The provided maps illustrate the
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Castellon
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now


As an overview, it can be
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seen
that there are slight
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changes
with lots of
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new
commercial buildings had
been built
surround the city center.
Moreover
, alongside the port, entertainment places were
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added
during the period.

The city center has remained and
was opened
up bike rental scheme. From the city center to the university, there is a
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tramline
and a
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new
station which has
been replaced
. A road for the vehicle is
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changed
into the road for pedestrians
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and
next
to the road is the port which
still
exists.
Furthermore
, cinema, bars, and clubs
are erected
on the
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left
side.

A noticeable
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change
is that more shopping places have
been built
around the city center. On the east side, there are a
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new
shopping
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center
, airport, and
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new
market. The
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old
market
was demolished
to
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a
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new
way for a tall
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new
shop building.
In addition
, the
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old
train station
is renovated
by a police station which nearby the hall for residents to
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live
.
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