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The diagram shows the life cycle of a honey bee

The diagram shows the life cycle of a honey bee 7OAY
The diagarm highlights the cycle of life in the hony bee. Overall, life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also clear that there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee from egg to become a mature adult. The life cycle commences when the female adult lays an egg, the female type usually lays about one or two eggs every three days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and appeas immeture insect or nymph. During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph's size grows and sheds its skin three times. This moulting continues 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later. After a maximum 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, immeture insect passes final moulting stage which is becoming the young adult honey bee. Finally, during onlyn4 days, it reaches full moturity.
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highlights the
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of
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life
in the
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hony
bee.

Overall
,
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life
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cycle
lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is
also
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that there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee from egg to become a mature adult.

The
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life
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cycle
commences when the female adult lays an egg, the female type
usually
lays about one or two eggs every three days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and
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appeas
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immeture
insect or nymph.

During the third stage of the
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life
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, the nymph's size grows and sheds its skin three times. This
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moulting
continues 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later. After a maximum 30 to 31 days from the
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start
of the
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cycle
,
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immeture
insect passes final
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moulting
stage which is becoming the young adult honey bee.
Finally
, during onlyn4 days, it reaches full
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moturity
.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the life cycle of a honey bee

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4 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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