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The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment.

The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment. RNoop
The chart illustrates the process of how tourist effect on countryside environment by walking there. Firs of all, trampling means flattening grass and when tourists tramps in the rural area they cause two negative effects. the firs negative effect is soil compaction. By regular walks the soil becomes hard underfoot and because of it air and water quality in the soil reduce. If air and water are not quality enough, the plants might not grow and reproduce. Regular walks damage vegetation and makes plants weaker and in consequence it leads them to reduce their flora.
The chart illustrates the process of how tourist effect on countryside environment by walking there.

Firs of all, trampling means flattening grass and when tourists
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effect is soil compaction. By regular walks the soil becomes
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underfoot and
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of it air and water quality in the soil
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. If air and water are not quality
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, the plants might not grow and reproduce. Regular walks damage vegetation and
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makes
plants weaker and in consequence it leads them to
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reduce
their flora.

IELTS academic The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment.

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