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The bar graph depicts the attendance of both genders in a wide range of popular sports in the UK during the year of 2008.

The bar graph depicts the attendance of both genders in a wide range of popular sports in the UK during the year of 2008. j5MAL
The bar graph depicts the attendance of both genders in a wide range of popular sports in the UK during the year 2008. Overall, swimming is the most popular pastime in England, whilst the graph demonstrates a reverse pattern in jogging. In addition to this, soccer and netball have the discrepancy between both genders’ attendance. As previously stated, both sexes' interests in swimming and the other which are not shown in this chart. Especially swimming, with roughly 23% for females and 14% for males. Furthermore, both genders are also attracted by tennis, basketball, table tennis, jogging, and cricket. The volume of females and their masculine counterparts do not have too much discrepancy. However, the total number of players in these sport is not high, approximately 15% for each one. Looking at the chart for more details, the remaining physical activities have a significant consideration in both sexes. To be more detailed, soccer is the most common sport amongst males that is expressed by nearly 24% belong to masculine and only a mere minority of females that just around 5%. On the other aspect in netball, the amount of feminine playing this sport is up to 25% whilst the data of males is just below 3%.
The bar graph depicts the attendance of both genders in a wide range of popular
sports
in the UK during the year 2008.

Overall
, swimming is the most popular pastime in England, whilst the graph demonstrates a reverse pattern in jogging.
In addition
to this, soccer and netball have the discrepancy between both genders’ attendance.

As previously stated, both sexes' interests in swimming and the other which are not shown in this chart.
Especially
swimming, with roughly 23% for females and 14% for males.
Furthermore
, both genders are
also
attracted by tennis, basketball, table tennis, jogging, and cricket. The volume of females and their masculine counterparts do not have too much discrepancy.
However
, the total number of players in these
sport
is not high, approximately 15% for each one.

Looking at the chart for more
details
, the remaining physical activities have a significant consideration in both sexes. To be more detailed, soccer is the most common
sport
amongst males that
is expressed
by
nearly
24% belong to masculine and
only
a mere minority of females that
just
around 5%. On the other aspect in netball, the amount of feminine playing this
sport
is up to 25% whilst the data of males is
just
below 3%.
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