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At the beginning, from the process we can see how equipment used in making of cement also how buildings include cements in their aims.

At the beginning, from the process we can see how equipment used in making of cement also how buildings include cements in their aims. yR96V
At the beginning, from the process we can see how equipment used in making of cement also how buildings include cements in their aims. Overall, it is apparent from the information, there are two diagrams which has five and one single stage respectively. The first step of cement-making process is adding the limestone to clay and go through crusher. The mixture is named powder which is in mixer will be sent to the rotating heater. The next stage involves heating and blending of the powder. The final product becomes ready after packing it in bags. As the second process illustrates how a cement is used as addicting ingredient in a concrete production. And the percentage of cement in a whole product consists 15. Other products as water, sand and gravel respectively 10%, 25% and 50% perfectly. And ultimately we receive concrete mixer which we can use it in construction purposes.
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Overall
, it is apparent from the information, there are two diagrams which has five and one single stage
respectively
.

The
first
step of cement-making process is adding the limestone to clay and go through crusher. The mixture
is named
powder which is in mixer will be
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sent
to the rotating heater.
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The
next
stage involves heating and blending of the powder.
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The
final product becomes ready after packing it in bags.

As the second process illustrates how a
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cement
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
as addicting ingredient in a concrete production. And the percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cement
in a whole product consists 15. Other products as water, sand and gravel
respectively
10%, 25% and 50%
perfectly
. And
ultimately
we receive concrete mixer which we can
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use
it in construction purposes.
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IELTS academic At the beginning, from the process we can see how equipment used in making of cement also how buildings include cements in their aims.

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