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The bar graph compares the government expenditure on different fields in the UAE in 2000. The data has been calibrated in a billion. Overall, it can be seen that the maximum amount was spent on social security. whereas, transport remained the least spendable sector. Having a clean glance, social security was the highly spent sector. spending on it was AED 100 billion. the second-highest sector was the health and personal social services, which accounted for ADE 53 billion. whereas, education covered ADE 38 billion. spending on other expenditures and dept interest had a similarity that was made up ADE 23 billion. By analysing other data, slightly more than a third was spent on the defence system. the industry and housing were minimum spending sectors, which were 13 billion and 15 billion respectively. on the other hand, the transport system was the least developed by the authority throughout the year, it manifested only less than one in ten AED billion.
The bar graph compares the
government
expenditure on
different
fields in the UAE in 2000. The data has
been calibrated
in a billion.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that the maximum amount
was spent
on social security.
whereas
, transport remained the least spendable sector.

Having a clean glance, social security was the
highly
spent sector.
spending
on it
was AED
100
billion
.
the
second-highest sector was the health and personal social services, which accounted for
ADE
53
billion
.
whereas
, education covered
ADE
38
billion
.
spending
on other expenditures and dept interest had a similarity that
was made
up
ADE
23 billion.

By
analysing
other data,
slightly
more than a third
was spent
on the
defence
system.
the
industry and housing were minimum spending sectors, which were 13
billion
and 15
billion
respectively
.
on
the other hand, the transport system was the least developed by the authority throughout the year, it manifested
only
less than one in ten AED
billion
.
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IELTS academic The bar graph compares the give you a good thing for a while, but I think that the government has not been

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