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The Bar graph below shows the reading habits of men and women. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Bar graph below shows the reading habits of men and women. Q8N53
The supplied bar graph compares the percentages of readers of different sex interested in six diverse categories of novels. As a general trend, it is quite evident that most men were interested in sports-related books while the majority of women were engaged in personal novels. To begin with, it can be observed that the large proportion of men that is nearly 21% had there interest in sports-related books. While almost all the women were attracted towards the personal novels accounting for approximately 19%. Meanwhile, roughly 12% men and 10% of women enumerated for business books. Thereafter, it is very clear that the proportion of men gradually decreased from left to right moving from population at around 12% to crime-associated books standing exactly at 2%. Furthermore, after personal novels, the second most preference of women were population and healthcare connected books sharing 15% each. In addition, the most unpopular genre among the women was crime drama.
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books
. Thereafter, it is
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gradually
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to right moving from population at around 12% to crime-associated
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standing exactly at 2%.

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women
were population and healthcare connected
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books
sharing 15% each.
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women
was crime drama.
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