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The diagram illustrate operation of solar water pump which supply water to a village from a underground pump

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The diagram illustrate operation of solar water pump which supply water to a village from a underground pump. This process involves three key utlets; a solar pannnel, , a underground well, which consists a pump and a water tank on ground surface. IIn the first step, a photovoltaic cell is used to harness sunlight to genrates dc power, this power is undertaken by bore pump to pump the water. A outlet pipe uplift the water from well to a water tanker outsideoutside. The watter is distribuited among village through pipes. This natural way of fetching water, provides fresh water accessible
The diagram illustrate operation of solar
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which supply
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to a village from
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underground
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pump
. This process involves three key
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utlets
; a solar
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pannnel
,
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underground well, which consists a
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pump
and a
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tank on ground surface.
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step, a photovoltaic cell is
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used
to harness sunlight to
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genrates
dc power, this power is undertaken by bore
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pump
to
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pump
the
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water
.
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outlet pipe uplift the
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water
from well to a
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water
tanker
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outsideoutside
. The
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watter
is
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distribuited
among village through pipes. This natural way of fetching
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water
, provides fresh
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water
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accessible
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrate operation of solar water pump which supply water to a village from a underground pump

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99 words
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