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The given charts illustrate the information about the island. One chart describes the island when construction was not developed and another denotes when all tourist facilities are available.

The given charts illustrate the information about the island. One chart describes the island when construction was not developed and another denotes when all tourist facilities are available. q5BnX
The given charts illustrate the information about the island. One chart describes the island when construction was not developed and another denotes when all tourist facilities are available. When luxuries amenities were not there in the island there was too much space on the island but after construction the island is congested. From the first chart we can observe that there were only trees on the island whereas after construction there are lots of things which are very useful for tourists available on the island. There was an accommodation area where they made small houses for tourists, also they added a restaurant for people which we cannot see in another chart. After construction the whole look of the island was completely changed. Before construction there was a beach on the island but after construction there are many different sections on the island such as swimming, reception and pler. Also vehicle tracks and footpaths are also included on the island.
The
given
charts
illustrate the information about the
island
. One
chart
describes
the
island
when
construction
was not developed and another denotes when all tourist facilities are available. When luxuries amenities were not there in the
island
there was too much space on the
island
but
after
construction
the
island
is congested
.

From the
first
chart
we can observe that there were
only
trees on the
island
whereas after
construction
there are lots of things which are
very
useful for tourists available on the
island
. There was an accommodation area where they made
small
houses
for tourists,
also
they
added
a restaurant for
people
which we cannot
see
in another
chart
.
After
construction
the whole look of the
island
was completely
changed
.
Before
construction
there was a beach on the
island
but
after
construction
there are
many
different
sections on the
island
such as swimming, reception and
pler
.
Also
vehicle
tracks
and footpaths are
also
included on the
island
.
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IELTS academic The given charts illustrate the information about the island. One chart describes the island when construction was not developed and another denotes when all tourist facilities are available.

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  American English
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5.5
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