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The graph shows the value of one country

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The bar chart provides data on the petroluem products were yhe main export revenue earners with over 60 billion dollars in 2015 and this figure continues increased and reached $62 in 2016. The second highest export amonut of engineered goods rose from $55 in 2015 to $61 in 2016. However, the number of export earning from germs and jewellery was dropped and hitted the lowest point ( $41) in 2016. . . . . . . .
The bar chart provides data on the
petroluem
products were
yhe
main export revenue earners with over 60 billion dollars in 2015 and this figure continues increased and reached $62 in 2016. The second highest export
amonut
of engineered
goods
rose from $55 in 2015 to $61 in 2016.
However
, the number of export earning from germs and
jewellery
was dropped
and
hitted
the lowest point
(
$41) in 2016.
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.
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the value of one country

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  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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