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The bar charts show how many local and international students were enrolled in the Bachelor of Science and Bachelor of Law courses at Bond University between 2010 and 2012.

The bar charts show how many local and international students were enrolled in the Bachelor of Science and Bachelor of Law courses at Bond University between 2010 and 2012. PRMdE
The bar charts illustrates the number of local students and international students who applied for 2 courses ( bachelor of science and bachelor of law) at the Bond University between the years 2010 and 2012. Overall, it is clear that, in both of the programs local students outweigh than international students. In addition, abroad students who took law has the lowest amount of members however, the locals who took science as the major showed a gradual decrease. In terms of first chart, the highest number of students who enrolled for science as the major was the locals in 2010 with 1000 student per year while the lowest enrollment was on the same year by the oversea students with less 500. At the end of 2012, the number of local students had gradually dropped while the oversea students graph had showed a steady rise and reached to over 800 students per year. On the other hand, the enrollment of bachelor of law as the major by the international students have been decreasing from 2010 to 2012 (220 and 150 respectively). On contrast, application for law by the local student has increased over the years with 400 students in 2010 and in 2011, 2012 there was a stable rate in enrollment which is around 450 students in both the years.
The bar charts
illustrates
the number of
local
students
and international
students
who
applied for 2 courses
(
bachelor of science and bachelor of
law)
at the Bond University between the years 2010 and 2012.

Overall
, it is
clear
that, in both of the programs
local
students
outweigh than international
students
.
In addition
, abroad
students
who
took
law
has the lowest amount of members
however
, the
locals
who
took science as the major
showed
a gradual decrease.

In terms of
first
chart, the highest number of
students
who
enrolled for science as the major was the
locals
in 2010 with 1000
student
per
year
while the lowest enrollment was on the same
year
by the oversea
students
with less 500. At the
end
of 2012, the number of
local
students
had
gradually
dropped while the oversea
students
graph had
showed
a steady rise and reached to over 800
students
per year.

On the other hand
, the enrollment of bachelor of
law
as the major by the international
students
have been decreasing from 2010 to 2012 (220 and 150
respectively
). On contrast, application for
law
by the
local
student
has increased over the years with 400
students
in 2010 and in 2011, 2012 there was a stable rate in enrollment which is around 450
students
in both the years.
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