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The bar charts present information about the proportion of water used in three sectors (industrial, agriculture, and domestic use) distinction by six regions of the world.

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The bar charts present information about the proportion of water used in three sectors (industrial, agriculture, and domestic use) distinction by six regions of the world. Generally, the most water was used mostly from agriculture sector whereas just a few water need for domestic use. In developing region such as Europe and North America mostly water used for industrial sector. Following this, there were two regions with highly consumed of water for industrial sector such as Europe and North America accounted for 48% and 53% respectively. While the other regions such as South-East Asia accounted by 12% and South America by 10%. The last, Africa and Central Asia were minority accounted for 7% and 5% respectively. Surprisingly, almost all regions were highly consumed a water for agriculture sector. The first position was Asia (Central and South-East) and Africa with reached more than 80%. Following this, South America accounted for 71%. The last, North America and Europe just less than 40% (32% and 39%). On the other hand, in domestic use, America (North and South) and Europe were reached the highest amount of water for domestic consume, accounted for 19%, 13%, and 15% respectively. While the others like Africa accounted by 7% as well as in Asia (Central and South-East areas).
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