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The bar charts below shows the number of inventions purchased by the US government that will save lives during natural disasters.

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The bar graph gives information about the number of inventions purchased by the US government that will save lives during natural disasters in 2015. The x-axis represents the inventions while the y-axis shows the purchased number of inventions. Overall, it can be clearly seen that C-water is the most purchased invention by the US government. As it can be noticed in the chart, C-water is the most purchased invention with almost 4400 purchased units. With a purchase unit around 250, public Lab DIY spectrometry kit is the lowest purchased invention. Furthermore, CAAT vehicle and Concrete Canvas are purchased at the same amount with 1200 units. The second and third most purchased invention are Aid Necessities Transporter and openRelief UAV with 3700, 3100 purchased unit respectively. While the the least purchased inventions are Disaster Relief toilet, LuminAID and The Terrain Solar Trailer with 350, 700 and 1500 purchased units respectively. In general, it is fairly apparent in the bar chart, US governement is mostly intrested in purchasing inventions C-water and Aid Necessities Transporter while they showed less interest in purchasing Public Lab DIY spectrometry Kit.
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during natural disasters in 2015. The x-axis represents the inventions while the y-axis
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that C-water is the most
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invention with almost 4400
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around 250, public Lab DIY
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spectrometry
kit is the lowest
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invention.
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CAAT
vehicle and Concrete Canvas are
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at the same amount with 1200
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invention are Aid Necessities Transporter and
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openRelief
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UAV
with 3700, 3100
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inventions are Disaster Relief toilet,
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LuminAID
and The Terrain Solar Trailer with 350, 700 and 1500
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