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The bar charts below provide information about honey production and honey producing colonies in the five American states in 2006.

The bar charts below provide information about honey production and honey producing colonies in the five American states in 2006. q6ebE
The rendered bar graph compares the amount of honey production in five states of America during 2006. In detailed view, the majority of the production of honey was completed by north Dakota that was 25 million pounds of the total as compare to the south Dakota because this state produced honey of approximately 11 million pounds then 10 million pounds honey was manufactured by Montana. Looking specifically, Minnesota produced 10 million pounds honey whereas Wisconsin produced less honey just 6 million pounds as compare to other states of America. Overall, it is quite apparent that, the maximum honey was manufactured by north Dakota and last Wisconsin in America.
The rendered bar graph compares the amount of honey production in five states of America during 2006. In detailed view, the majority of the production of honey
was completed
by
Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "North Dakota"
north Dakota
that was 25
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million
pounds of the total as compare to the
Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South Dakota"
south Dakota
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because
this state produced honey of approximately 11
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million
pounds then 10
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million
pounds honey
was manufactured
by Montana. Looking
specifically
, Minnesota produced 10
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million
pounds honey whereas Wisconsin produced less honey
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just
6
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
pounds as compare to other states of America.
Overall
, it is quite apparent that, the maximum honey
was manufactured
by
Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "North Dakota"
north Dakota
and last Wisconsin in America.
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IELTS academic The bar charts below provide information about honey production and honey producing colonies in the five American states in 2006.

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