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The bar chart shows the telephone calls in UK in term of the total number of minutes by category in 1995 and 2000.

The bar chart shows the telephone calls in UK in term of the total number of minutes by category in 1995 and 2000. mbYdO
The provided bar chart illustrates the information about different type of telephone calls in the UK terms of total number of minutes by category from 1995 to 2000. The data has been given in millions. Overall, it is apparent that the number of all three calls categories followed an increasing trend over the given time period. while the number of calls was maximum in local - landline. To begin with, the total number of calls followed an increasing trend between 1995 and 2004 which was Mark at around 10000 millions in mobiles. In addition to it, the number of calls was constant from 1997 to 1998 which was accounted for 2000 millions. The maximum number of calls was observed in local - landline which was marked at approximately at 16000 million of the total. The number of calls mobile was constant at 0 million in the first year than it slightly rose in the next five years which was depicts at 10000 millions in 2003. On the other hand. In 1997, the number of calls was similar at approximately 20000 millions in the both category. There was a difference of 5 millions calls between local- landline and mobiles in 2004. In the team of calls was accounted for 3000 millions of the total number which consequently rose at 6000 millions in the next year.
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