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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. b5lB
The given column chart illustrates the points of teams A, B, and C from the year 2002 to 2005. According to the data, team B had scored the highest point in all four years. However, the team had scored the lowest point in all four years. It can be seen from the given graph, In the year 2002, the highest point is scored by team B, which is 82. Also, that is the highest score among all years. In the year 2003, it fell down to 60. Team A and team C scored 5 and 10 points in 2002. On the other hand, it is a slight increase in 2003 which is 11 and 15 points respectively. In the year 2004 and 2005 team b again b again stored at high pick which is 43 and 55 respectively. whereas, team A scored 35 points in the year 2004. Then it dropped to 8 in 2005. Moreover, there were 12 and 5 points scored by team c in 2004 and 2005 accordingly.
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of
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teams
A, B, and C from the
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2002 to 2005.

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B had
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the highest
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point
in all four years.
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had
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the lowest
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point
in all four years.

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graph, In the
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2002, the highest
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is
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by
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B, which is 82.
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the highest score among all years. In the
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2003, it fell down to 60.
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A and
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C
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scored
5 and 10
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in 2002.
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, it is a slight increase in 2003 which is 11 and 15
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points
respectively
.

In the
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2004 and 2005
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stored at high pick which is 43 and 55
respectively
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whereas
,
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team
A
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35
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in the
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2004. Then it dropped to 8 in 2005.
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c in 2004 and 2005
accordingly
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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