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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. JW20
The bar chart illustrates the scores of teams A, B, and C with four different seasons. Every year score levels are very various. The scores of teams happening between 2002-2005. Overall, it can be well-observed that team B scores the highest result between other teams and the pick score was in 2002. However, after 2002 team B scores starts decreasing slowly. In team A it can be seen, that in 2004 team A scores are the highest result of all period of time. Furthermore, team C the highest score was in 2003. The lowest scores are in the team A and C in the 2002 and 2005. On the one hand, team B's score in 2002 was the highest score between the three teams and the score was well over three quarters (eighty-two points), although in 2004 team B had the lowest score around a half (forty-three points). It can be well-recognized, that in 2002 team A had the poorest score of all periods of time (2002-2005) it has a tiny fraction (five-point). On the other hand, the second team which has one of the best scores is team A. In 2004 team A had nearly one-third of points (thirty-five points). Team A had the highest result solely in 2004 between these four seasons.
The bar chart illustrates the
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levels are
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happening between 2002-2005.

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B
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the highest result between other
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and the pick
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was in 2002.
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A
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are the highest result of all period of time.
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C the highest
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was in 2003. The lowest
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are in the
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A and C in the 2002 and 2005.

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B's
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in 2002 was the highest
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between the three
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and the
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was well over three quarters (eighty-two
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, although in 2004
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B had the lowest
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around a half (forty-three
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. It can be well-recognized, that in 2002
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A had the poorest
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of all periods of time (2002-2005) it has a tiny fraction (five-point).

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which has one of the best
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is
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A. In 2004
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A had the highest result
solely
in 2004 between these four seasons.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

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