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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015. gp61
The bar graph compares the earnings through exports while the table indicates the changes by percentage in different categories in 2015 and 2016. Moreover, earnings are measured in billions whereas percentage changes are measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that earnings rose in three out of five categories whilst the highest number of changes in value were in textiles and the lowest in agricultural products. In terms of petroleum products, it showed a minimal increase in 2016, and in both years, it was just above 60 billion; however, the percentage change was 3%. Regarding engineered goods, it witnessed a significant jump in 2016 with just above 60 billion, and in 2015 it was just below 60 billion; by contrast, the percentage change was 8. 5%. There was a marginal difference in agricultural products, and the percentage change was only 0. 81%, which was the smallest. With regards to textile, there was a considerable climb, and the percentage change was 15. 24% which was the greatest. In contrast germs and jewelry, it went down slightly in 2016, and the percentage change was 5. 81%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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