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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart describes the numbers of total world population in 4 countries between 1950 and 2002, with estimation for 2050, there are 4 main countries which are China, India, USA, and Japan. The most populated nation in 1950 was China with more than 20% of the world population, followed by India with 15% and third position was USA with less than 10% and the most least populated was Japan with almost 5% of world population. Further more, in 2002 India was the only country that rise to 17% of the population. However, for China, USA, and Japan experienced decreased to 20%, 5%, and less than 5%. In Addition to that, in 2050 it is estimated that india will continue grow to almost 20%, instead for China and japan they will still have to face decreased of popuation, while USA will stay in 5% of the total world population.
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in 4 countries between 1950 and 2002, with estimation for 2050, there are 4 main countries which are China, India, USA, and Japan.

The most populated nation in 1950 was China with more than 20% of the
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, followed by India with 15% and third position was USA with less than 10% and the
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populated was Japan with almost 5% of
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country that rise to 17% of the
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

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