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The bar chart shows the opinions of all courses students at an Australian university viewed different subjects on a scale of easy to difficult.

The bar chart shows the opinions of all courses students at an Australian university viewed different subjects on a scale of easy to difficult. AprQe
The bar chart illustrates the opinions of Australian students at the university rated 7 subjects on a scale of easy to difficult. Overall, African languages were viewed as the easiest subject among the 3 subjects of languages. While Chemistry was picked ‘easy’ by most students (70%), the same proportions of students rated Maths as ‘difficult’. As can be seen in the chart, Physics and Art were marked ‘moderately difficult’ by 25% and 20%, respectively and the complex subjects by almost equal numbers at 50%. In the case of languages, a minority of students rated Oriental Languages as ‘easy’, whereas Languages doubled at 40%. However, one of three subjects of languages - African languages which were picked as the easiest subject at 60%. By contrast, other subjects (Physics, Maths and Art) just ranged around 20% to 30% of easy level. It is interesting to note that Chemistry was the least difficult among and Maths had the most difficult level among 3 subjects of science.
The bar chart illustrates the opinions of Australian
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at the university rated 7
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subjects
on a scale of
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to difficult.

Overall
, African
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languages
were viewed
as the easiest
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subject
among the 3
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subjects
of
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languages
. While Chemistry
was picked
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‘easy’
by most
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students
(70%), the same proportions of
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students
rated
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Maths
as ‘difficult’.

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seen
in the chart, Physics and Art
were marked
‘
moderately
difficult’ by 25% and 20%,
respectively
and the complex
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subjects
by almost equal numbers at 50%. In the case of
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languages
, a minority of
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students
rated Oriental
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Languages
as
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‘easy’
, whereas
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Languages
doubled at 40%.
However
, one of three
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of
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-
African
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which
were picked
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at 60%. By contrast, other
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(Physics,
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Maths
and Art)
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ranged around 20% to 30% of
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level.

It is interesting to note that Chemistry was the least difficult among and
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Maths
had the most difficult level among 3
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subjects
of science.

IELTS academic The bar chart shows the opinions of all courses students at an Australian university viewed different subjects on a scale of easy to difficult.

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