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The table graph illustrates the survey results of Scottish adults by their age and participation in various cultures activities in last year.

The table graph illustrates the survey results of Scottish adults by their age and participation in various cultures activities in last year. RM08
The table graph illustrates the survey results of Scottish adults by their age and participation in various cultures activities in last year. As per or asper With regard the undertaking any crafts, the number of elder peoples (45-74) were involved extremely high 22% than other age groups. However, only less (45-74) aged people were shown interested on any writing activity than other age groups. .
The table graph illustrates the survey results of Scottish adults by their age and participation in various cultures activities in last year.

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With regard the undertaking any crafts, the number of elder peoples (45-74)
were involved
extremely
high 22% than other age groups.
However
,
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only
less (45-74) aged
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
were shown
interested on any writing activity than other age groups.
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IELTS academic The table graph illustrates the survey results of Scottish adults by their age and participation in various cultures activities in last year.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
65 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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