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Task 1 writing , fast food consumption in melbourne

Task 1 writing, fast food consumption in melbourne nEVOe
The table presents the fast food consumption trend in Melbourn at three periods of time: 2005, the present, and 2025. According to the table, Hambuger was consumed the most in 2005 with 40 units. The amount of Hambuger eaten is 2 units lowered at the present than in the past, yet it still ranks first in comparison to other types of fast food. Also, the consumption of Hambuger is predicted to be the highest among others with 51 units in 2025. Fried Chicken is the second popular fast food in both 2005 and now (with 35 and 37 units respectively). The consumption of Fried Chicken is expected to reach 45 units in 2025 and still ranks second. The least popular fast foods are Fried Rice, Noodles, and Salad. While Fried Rice and Noodles consumption have undergone a minor change from 6 units in 2005 to 9 units and 8 units respectively in the present, and they are predicted to remain in the future, Salad consumption has dramatically increased from 5 units in 2005 to 15 units now. The amount of Salad eaten is also predicted to go up to 41 units in 2025. Overall, Hambuger is favored the most by people in Melbourne and Salad is becoming one of the most popular fast food among the citizens.
The table
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presents
the
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fast
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food
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consumption
trend in
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Melbourn
at three periods of time: 2005, the
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present
, and 2025.

According to the table,
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Hambuger
was consumed
the most in 2005 with 40
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units
. The amount of
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Hambuger
eaten is 2
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units
lowered at the
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present
than in the past,
yet
it
still
ranks
first
in comparison
to other types of
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fast
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food
.
Also
, the
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consumption
of
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Hambuger
is predicted
to be the highest among others with 51
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units
in 2025.
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Fried
Chicken is the second popular
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fast
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food
in both 2005 and
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now
(with 35 and 37
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units
respectively
). The
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consumption
of
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Fried
Chicken is
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expected
to reach 45
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units
in 2025 and
still
ranks second.

The least popular
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fast
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foods
are
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Fried
Rice, Noodles, and
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Salad
. While
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Fried
Rice and Noodles
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consumption
have undergone a minor
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change
from 6
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units
in 2005 to 9
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units
and 8
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units
respectively
in the
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present
, and they
are predicted
to remain in the future,
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Salad
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consumption
has
dramatically
increased from 5
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units
in 2005 to 15
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units
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now
. The amount of
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Salad
eaten is
also
predicted to go up to 41
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units
in 2025.

Overall
,
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Hambuger
is favored
the most by
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people
in Melbourne and
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Salad
is becoming one of the most popular
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fast
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food
among the citizens.
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IELTS academic Task 1 writing, fast food consumption in melbourne

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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