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The bar chart shows the number of people in 5 continents that lived in urban areas from 1975 to 2000, with a prediction of 2030

The bar chart shows the number of people in 5 continents that lived in urban areas from 1975 to 2000, with a prediction of 2030 2rNnX
The bar chart compares how many people in 5 different continents lived in urban areas between 1975 and 2000 including the projection for the year 2030. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the percentage of urban people increased in all continents. Asia and Africa both experienced the highest level of increase; however, despite having the highest proportion of urban population in 2000, both Europe and North America underwent the smallest increase. As can be seen from this chart, in 1975, the majority of this city- dwellers were in European and American continents while only 22- 23% Asian and African were in municipalities. After 25 year, over seven - tenths of the universal population lived in European and American cities. More than one- third African lived in urban areas in this year while it was slightly under 40% in Asia. It is projected that roughly four- fifths in America would be the living population while nearly half of the population will start living in different cities in 2030.
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increased in all continents. Asia and Africa both experienced the highest level of increase;
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in 2000, both Europe and North America underwent the smallest increase.

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from this chart, in 1975, the majority of this city- dwellers were in European and American continents while
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