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Refrigerator sales of company ABC

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The bar graph elucidates the information about ABC organisation sold fridge from 2001 to 2004. All in all, the highest sold electronic appliances in 2004, nonetheless, lowest earnings in 2001. It is evident from the graph that in the year 2004, company had a profit of nearly 120 million dollars from 165ltr. model whilst it lessened with around 110 million dollars in 2003 along with 300ltr. model fridge got similar figure. Moreover, double door model's selling were inclined to more than 100 million dollars in 2004, on the other side, it had declined by approximately 20 millions dollars. 300ltr. refrigerator gained neigh 100 millions dollars in 2004.
The bar graph elucidates the information about ABC
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organisation
sold fridge from 2001 to 2004. All in all, the highest sold electronic appliances in 2004, nonetheless,
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lowest
earnings in 2001. It is evident from the graph that in the year 2004,
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company
had a profit of
nearly
120
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million
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dollars
from 165ltr.
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model
whilst it lessened with around 110
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million
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dollars
in 2003 along with 300ltr.
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model
fridge
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got
similar figure.
Moreover
, double door model's selling
were inclined
to more than 100
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million
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dollars
in 2004, on the other side, it had declined by approximately 20
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millions
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dollars
. 300ltr.
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refrigerator
gained neigh 100
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millions
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dollars
in 2004.
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IELTS academic Refrigerator sales of company ABC

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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