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sdfThe chart and table shows how export of goods changed over 2015 and 2016, and information is given in billions of dollars in the chart and percentages change in values.

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The chart and table shows how export of goods changed over 2015 and 2016, and information is given in billions of dollars in the chart and percentages change in values. It’s clearly seen, that petroleum products are in the top of export earnings in both years with just above 60 billion dollars in 2015 and around 63 billion dollars in 2016. The next biggest product that exported in 2015 (just above 55 billion) and 2016 (just above 60 billion) is engineered goods, and also this is the second product with a significant growth with export value in 2016 is 8. 5 percent. The textiles have twice more increase of changes values than engineered goods in 2016, however, this export value in billions is less than others group of exporting products. The gems and jewelry have just around 40 billion dollars in both years, while agricultural products are less in one-third than jewellery export value. The petroleum products and engineered goods are at the top of the export products in 2015 and 2016, however, the last one has a more significant increase than the first exporting product.
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earnings in both years with
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in 2015 and around 63
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in 2016. The
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and 2016 (
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value in 2016 is 8. 5 percent. The textiles have twice more increase of
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in both years, while agricultural
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IELTS academic sdfThe chart and table shows how export of goods changed over 2015 and 2016, and information is given in billions of dollars in the chart and percentages change in values.

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