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The bar chart shows the literacy rate (% of people who can read and write) by region and gender in 2011.

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The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of literate people by gender across seven different regions all around the world in 2011. Generally speaking, residents of central and eastern regions, including Central Asia, Central/Eastern Europe, and East Asia/Pacific, were more interested in education since they had the highest literacy rates. Moreover, Central Asia and Central/Eastern Europe were the only regions that had a relatively equal number of literate individuals. Regarding the least literate area, Sub-Saharan Africa had the lowest proportion of educated inhabitants with males making up almost 70% of people who can read and write and females accounting for about 11% less than them all. And, considering the literacy rate of around 100%, Central Asia was known as the most literate area among all of the regions. Furthermore, while males outnumber females in all regions, the gender gap for each region was not significant except for South and West Asia, where males outnumbered their female counterparts by approximately 38%.
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