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The diagrams define the stages and equipment used in making of cement and how cement is used to produce concrete

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The diagrams define the stages and equipments used in making of cement and how cement is used to produce concrete. Let's talk about procedure for making cement. First, limestone and clay are crushed by crusher and change it into powder form, then this powder is passed through mixer, now both products are mixed well and this mixture further passed into rotating heater, constant heat is supply to heater so that material into it acquire the heat properly. Now the mixture that is present in rotating heater is transfer to Grinder where we get the cement as a product. Furthermore, the cement is packed in bags. Now coming to the concrete production, in this process Cement, water, sand and gravel (small stones) are used approximately 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively. These mixtures are poured in the equipment known as concrete mixture for mixing well. Overall, in making of cement, limestone and clay are the two main products that are passed by various equipments and for making the concrete production, cement is mixed with sand, water and Gravel. Gravel is also known as small stones is main material for concrete production.
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cement
and how
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is
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used
to produce concrete.

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Let
's talk about procedure for making
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cement
.
First
, limestone and clay
are crushed
by crusher and
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change
it into powder form, then this powder
is passed
through mixer,
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now
both products
are mixed
well and this
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mixture
further
passed into rotating heater, constant heat is supply to heater
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so
that material into it acquire the heat
properly
.
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Now
the
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mixture
that is
present in rotating heater is transfer to Grinder where we
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get
the
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cement
as a product.
Furthermore
, the
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cement
is packed
in bags.

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Now
coming to the concrete production, in this process
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Cement
, water, sand and gravel (
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small
stones) are
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used
approximately 15%, 10%, 25% and 50%
respectively
. These mixtures
are poured
in the equipment known as concrete
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mixture
for mixing well.

Overall
, in making of
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cement
, limestone and clay are the two main products that
are passed
by various equipments and for making the concrete production,
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cement
is mixed
with sand, water and Gravel. Gravel is
also
known as
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small
stones is main material for concrete production.

IELTS academic The diagrams define the stages and equipment used in making of cement and how cement is used to produce concrete

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