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The bar chart reveals data about the ratio of female university education in five different countries trough the time 1980 and 2015.

The bar chart reveals data about the ratio of female university education in five different countries trough the time 1980 and 2015. E7MDB
The bar chart reveals data about the ratio of female university education in five different countries trough the time 1980 and 2015. Overall, the ratio higher education in women was increased over the time. only in South korea, women ratio of university education was doubled. However, all other countries had double higher education ratio of South korea. Australia and France had not seen any significant improvement. In 1980, the porportion of female higher education was 35%, by 2015, it had rise around 20% and reached 55% in UK. smilarly the Usa ratio was also increased 20% over the time reached 58% which 48% in 1980. Asutralia was the most stable country which same ratio around 58% in 1980 and 2015. South korea was doubled their women university education through the period and reached at 30%. France was only increased 5% and it was 50% in 1980 and reached 55% 2015.
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around 58% in 1980 and 2015.
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