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Consumption of the fast food in UK

Consumption of the fast food in UK 2KkVo

The line graph provides information about consumotion of 3 differents ( hamburger, fish &cips, pizza) fast food over the next twenty years in the UK. Overall, It is clear that rose significant fish & chips, and hamburger while, pizza slightly decreased in the end of the period. According to line graph, in the begining 1970 most highest consumption of pizza with 300fg/week. After that fish&chips about 80g/week, hamburger round 40g/week, respectively. During the 10 years, fish& chips and hamburger rose gradually with 150g/week and 80g/week. At the same time pizza slightly lower in the year 1980 with aproximately 200g/week. After the year 1980 fish & chips showed a significant rise and outroced pizza. In the year 1990 to reach a peak of consumption with 500g/week and hamburger reached almost 300g/week. Pizza during end of the period decreased slowly and finally around 205g/week. In conclusion, It can be seen consumption of fast food show a upward trend over the 20 years.

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