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In the following paragraph, the author writes about an uncle, who I reunited with after a long time, and how “I” feel about him: I did not see him smile anymore.

In the following paragraph, the author writes about an uncle, who I reunited with after a long time, and how “I” feel about him: I did not see him smile anymore. aQYLw

In the following paragraph, the author writes about an uncle, who I reunited with after a long time, and how “I” feel about him: I did not see him smile anymore. There wasn't any satisfaction in him when he stood with a woman who seemed too fatigued to bother about the love that was left in the cupboard. I saw my aunt's eyes soften when I heard people ask him to strike up a casual conversation. Several times, I'm like a blind eye and ear-splitting person when seeing him hurrying away for the shifts but actually going out with another woman to bars, clubs, or shopping for frivolous things. Several times, I heard that he lacked money but actually that guy lacked money for a woman who had two kids and also is moved by him. Several times, I had been told by my aunt's daughter about the tears that broke out in the dark night. Several times, I found out that my aunt is out of all the pennies to buy a bunch of vegetables, but that man can spend lots of money buying winter coats for mistresses with no blood ties. The dinner table, the spoon, and the chopsticks all seemed to have lost their familiarity to me. In the puff of cigarette smoke, then hiding in the suffocating air that still hung on the tip of my nose, I saw a man with silence, dark eyes, and transmitting emotionless impulses that penetrated into every solitude cell. I can create a feeling in that dark apple of the eye is filled with ambition and the imprint of the dead heart.

In the following paragraph, the author writes about an uncle, who I reunited with after a long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
, and how “I” feel about him:

I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 him smile anymore. There wasn't any satisfaction in him when he stood with a woman who seemed too fatigued to bother about the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 that was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in the cupboard.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 my aunt's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtastefeelingmindview
eyes
 soften when I heard This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 ask him to strike up a casual conversation.

Several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
, I'm like a blind You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtastefeelingmindview
eye
 and ear-splitting person when seeing him hurrying away for the shifts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 actually going out with another woman to bars, clubs, or shopping for frivolous things.

Several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
, I heard that he lacked money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 actually that guy lacked money for a woman who had two kids and also
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 by him.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
, I had been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 by my aunt's daughter about the tears that broke out in the dark night.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
, I found out that my aunt is out of all the pennies to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a bunch of vegetables, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 can spend lots of money buying winter coats for mistresses with no blood ties.

The dinner table, the spoon, and the chopsticks all seemed to have lost their familiarity to me.

In the puff of cigarette smoke, then hiding in the suffocating air that still
 hung on the tip of my nose, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 with silence, dark You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtastefeelingmindview
eyes
, and transmitting emotionless impulses that penetrated into every solitude cell.

I can create a feeling in that dark apple of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtastefeelingmindview
eye
is filled
 with ambition and the imprint of the dead heart. 