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The bar graph represents the number of luxury cars sold in 2015 and 2016 in a country.

The bar graph represents the number of luxury cars sold in 2015 and 2016 in a country. 8QW8r
The bar graph provides and compares information on the number of units sold for lavish car models between 2015 and 2016. Overall, it is evident that except for Mercedes-Benz C-Class there was a decline in the number of cars sold from 2015 to 2016. In the BMW 3 Series case, slightly less than 80000 in 2015, and the rate decreased to 70000 the following year. Similarly, Lexus ES and Infiniti observed the same trend for the difference of around 5000 between the two years with approximately 60000 and near 45000 cars respectively. On the other hand, there was a negligible dissimilarity where both recorded close to 50000 for Mercedes-Benz E-Class. Mercedes-Benz C-Class went against the general flow in which 2016 having a little below 75000 led the previous by 5000. Lastly, BMW 5 Series had near to half of the earlier one in 2015 and just above 30000 were reported for 2015-16 respectively.
The bar graph provides and compares information on the number of units sold for lavish car models between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it is evident that
except for
Mercedes-Benz C-
Class
there was a decline in the number of cars sold from 2015 to 2016.

In the BMW 3 Series case,
slightly
less than 80000 in 2015, and the rate decreased to 70000 the following year.
Similarly
, Lexus ES and
Infiniti
observed the same trend for the difference of around 5000 between the two years with approximately 60000 and near 45000 cars
respectively
.
On the other hand
, there was a negligible dissimilarity where both recorded close to 50000 for Mercedes-Benz E-
Class
. Mercedes-Benz C-
Class
went against the general flow in which 2016 having a
little
below 75000 led the previous by 5000.

Lastly
, BMW 5 Series had near to half of the earlier one in 2015 and
just
above 30000
were reported
for 2015-16
respectively
.
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