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The bar chart provides information about the proportion of British citizens providing money to charity by age groups for the period of 1990 to 2010

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The bar chart provides information about the proportion of British citizens providing money to charity by age groups for the period of 1990 to 2010. Transactions are measured in percentage. Overall, it can be seen clearly people gave more charity in 1990 as compared to 2010 and it was highest in 1990, it accounted for almost 42% whereas it was lowest in 2010, it comprised to 6%. The age group of 18-25 was giving money to charity around 16% which was lowest among all the age groups in 1990 and it increased by 14% in 26-35 groups. Those who were in the 36-50 age group were most generous and was giving the highest amount of charity of around 42%. Moving towards 51-65 and over 65 groups there is a slight decline in the charity, and it was around 35% and 32% respectively. In 2010, youngsters gave less charity as compared to older citizens. In the case of the 18-25 age group, the rate of charity was 6% which was declined by 10% in comparison to 2019. Coming towards 26-35 age group again there was a decline in the amount and it fell to 24%. Similarly, in the case of 36-50, there was a fall and it reached at around 35% whereas in 51-65 and over 65 age groups there is a slight incline in the money given to charity, it accounted for 39% and 35% respectively.
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for the period of 1990 to 2010. Transactions
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in 1990 as compared to 2010 and it was highest in 1990, it accounted for almost 42% whereas it was lowest in 2010, it comprised to 6%.

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age
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of 18-25 was giving money to
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around
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age
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in 1990 and it increased by 14% in 26-35
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groups
. Those who were in the 36-50
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age
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were most generous and was giving the highest amount of
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of
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around
42%. Moving towards 51-65 and over 65
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there is a slight decline in the
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, and it was
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around
35% and 32%
respectively
.

In 2010, youngsters gave less
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as compared to older citizens. In the case of the 18-25
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, the rate of
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was 6% which
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in comparison
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again there was a decline in the amount and it fell to 24%.
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35% whereas in 51-65 and over 65
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there is a slight incline in the money
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, it accounted for 39% and 35%
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