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The bar chart provides information about the amount of water storage capacity in 6 urban areas of Australia in the two years 2009 October and 2010 October.

The bar chart provides information about the amount of water storage capacity in 6 urban areas of Australia in the two years 2009 October and 2010 October. gGBkd
The bar chart provides information about the amount of water storage capacity in 6 urban areas of Australia in the two years 2009 October and 2010 October. Overall, the figure for water level increased in 4 cities, whereas Darwin had a noticeable fall over the period shown. However, in both years Brisbane showed a period of stability. According to the data, Darwin stood at 45% at the beginning, but the next year it decreased significantly to about 28% in 2010. As for Perth and Canberra, these both urban areas climbed the same amount of percentage, with nearly 20%. In interest, Brisbane remained unchanged at 55%. With regards to Sydney, it experienced a slight growth of 6%. Likewise, the figure for Melbourne climbed by 10% between 2009 and 2010. In addition, Melbourne saw a through percent, with roughly 22%.
The bar chart provides information about the amount of water storage capacity in 6 urban areas of Australia in the two years 2009 October and 2010 October.

Overall
, the figure for water level increased in 4 cities, whereas Darwin had a noticeable fall over the period shown.
However
, in both years Brisbane
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
a period of stability.

According to the data, Darwin stood at 45% at the beginning,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the
next
year it decreased
significantly
to about 28% in 2010. As for Perth and Canberra, these both urban areas climbed the same amount of percentage, with
nearly
20%. In interest, Brisbane remained unchanged at 55%.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
Sydney, it experienced a slight growth of 6%.
Likewise
, the figure for Melbourne climbed by 10% between 2009 and 2010.
In addition
, Melbourne
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
a
Did you mean "thorough" (accurate, exhaustive)?
through
percent, with roughly 22%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart provides information about the amount of water storage capacity in 6 urban areas of Australia in the two years 2009 October and 2010 October.

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