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The diagram below shows how cocoa beans are prepared for export to countries that make chocolate.

The diagram below shows how cocoa beans are prepared for export to countries that make chocolate. 56k8n

At the first stage of the preparatory work of cocoa beans before export to countries that make chocolate is fermentation stage. First of all, the ripe pod need to be picked from the cocoa trees then made them become the beans and pulp. After that, put the beans and pulp on to the banana leaves for 6 days in sun. For this progress, the beans would turn purple to brown. The second stage of this diagram is drying. In this stage, the beans were raised mats for 10 to 20 days and sack the dried beans separately that sent them to the local agent. The last stage of the diagram is export. But before export to the countries, it need to been took weighing and checked for quality. And the local agent would paid the money to farmers after this work is done. Finish all of these progress, the cocoa beans can be sent to countries successfully.

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 of this diagram is drying. In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
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 them to the local agent.

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