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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994 .

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994. 15b8q
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994 Overall, men are arrested more than women and both have a same highest reason. In five years ending 1994, there are 32% of males who are arrested, just over triple higher than the females with 9%. The percentage of men who are free are double higher than the arrested. Contrary to that, the free women are 10 times higher than the criminals. In all of the reasons, there are 4 reasons that the men comprise a higher rates than womens, and the remain are the women higher than men. For their reasons, no answer just accounts for a minority share. Public drinking responsible for the the highest amount of proportion and this mistake of females is higher than males. Putting in order, the males rates of their recent reason for lowest to highest are: No answer, thief, assautl, breach of order, other resson, drink driving and public drinking. Similar to males, the females are: no answer, breach of order, thief, drink driving, other reason, assault and public drinking.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who
are captured
and the bar chart illustrates the
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reason
why they
are captured
in the five years ending 1994

Overall
,
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men
are arrested
more than
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women
and both have a same highest reason.

In five years ending 1994, there are 32% of
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males
who
are arrested
,
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just
over triple higher than the females with 9%. The percentage of
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men
who are free are double higher than the arrested. Contrary to that, the free
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women
are 10 times higher than the criminals. In
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all of the
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reasons
, there are 4
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reasons
that the
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men
comprise a higher rates than
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womens
, and
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the remain
are the
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women
higher than
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men
. For their
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reasons
, no answer
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just
accounts for a minority share. Public drinking responsible for
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the the
highest amount of proportion and this mistake of females is higher than
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males
. Putting in order, the
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males
rates of their recent
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reason
for lowest to
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highest
are: No answer, thief,
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assautl
, breach of order, other
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resson
,
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drink driving
and public drinking. Similar to
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males
, the females are: no answer, breach of order, thief,
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drink driving
, other
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reason
, assault and public drinking.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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