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Task 1 IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002) (my friends version)

Task 1 IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002) (my friends version) e5w0V
The given line graph compares the amount of good transported: road, water, rail and pipeline in the uk during 1974 to 2002. Overall, the highest quantities of good was shipped via road whereas pipeline remained the least commonly used mode of transportation. As can be seen from the line the graph, 70 milion tonnes of commodities were transported by road in 1974 and this quantities increased to about 97 milion tonnes at the end of period (2002), while pipeline started with 1 milion tonnes of goods in 1974. This figure rose 20 milion tonnes of good were delivered in the year 2002. According to the given line graph, Rail and water transported 40 milion tonnes of commodies in 1974 and this quantity had some changes. In details, the amount of goods were shipped via water went up about 62 milion tonnes in 2002 while rail still mantained the same figure of the year 1974 (40 milion tonnes) before had the decrease from 1986 to 1994 (35 milion tonnes of goods) In conclusion, road transportation and water transportation carried more quantities than 2 transportation left.
The
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given
line graph compares the amount of
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good
transported:
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road
,
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water
, rail and pipeline in the
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uk
during 1974 to 2002.

Overall
, the highest
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quantities
of
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good
was shipped
via
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road
whereas pipeline remained the least
commonly
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used
mode of transportation.

As can be
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seen
from the line the graph, 70
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milion
tonnes of commodities
were transported
by
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road
in 1974 and
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this
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quantities
increased to about 97
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milion
tonnes at the
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end
of period (2002), while pipeline
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started
with 1
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milion
tonnes of
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goods
in 1974. This figure rose 20
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milion
tonnes of
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good
were delivered
in the year 2002.

According to the
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given
line graph, Rail and
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water
transported 40
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milion
tonnes of
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commodies
in 1974 and this
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quantity
had
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some
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changes
. In
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details
, the amount of
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goods
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were
shipped via
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water
went up about 62
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milion
tonnes in 2002 while rail
still
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mantained
the same figure of the year 1974 (40
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milion
tonnes)
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before
had the decrease from 1986 to 1994 (35
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milion
tonnes of
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goods
)

In conclusion
,
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road
transportation and
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water
transportation carried more
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quantities
than 2 transportation
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left
.

IELTS academic Task 1 IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002) (my friends version)

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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