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The bar chart provided compares 5 different countries labelled A-E in terms of movie production over the course of 3 years, from 2007 to 2009.

The bar chart provided compares 5 different countries labelled A-E in terms of movie production over the course of 3 years, from 2007 to 2009. G9GWQ
The bar chart provided compares 5 different countries labelled A-E in terms of movie production over the course of 3 years, from 2007 to 2009. Generally, it is readily apparent that the number of films produced in country B, C and E witnessed a rising trend whereas the opposite was true for the remaining counterparts. Furthermore, movies was the most popular in country A among all nations. To be more specific, movies production accounted for the lion's share in country A, stood at nearly 90, far higher than that of country B coming in second place. However, it experienced a minimal decline by 5 in 2009. Similar trend was repeated in country D which started at 15 and went down by around 5, along with a significant pullback of 10 in the number of films generated. On the other hand, movies production in country B saw a marginal growth by 3 in 2008 and then considerably jumped to 70 at the end of the given time. The similar trend was true for the figures of country C and E, starting at nearly 10 for both in 2007 then rose by 2 and 3 respectively in the end of the timescale.
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