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The graph illustrates accommodation of households in England and Wales from the year 1918 to 2011.The data has been found in percentage and it is calibrated as owned and rented apartments.

The graph illustrates accommodation of households in England and Wales from the year 1918 to 2011. The data has been found in percentage and it is calibrated as owned and rented apartments. MBKj6
The graph illustrates accommodation of households in England and Wales from the year 1918 to 2011. The data has been found in percentage and it is calibrated as owned and rented apartments. Overall, the percentage of households in rented accommodation was high as compare to households in owned accommodation between the year 1918 and 2011 in England and Wales, while number of owned households increased dramatically from the year 1918 to 2011. It is quite clear from the graph that, percentage rate of households in rented accommodation accounted was under 80 % in the year 1953. It started decreases until the year 1961 of about 70%. After that from the year 1953 to 2001, it has been decreased up to about 30%. At the end 2011, it was accounted about 40 %. Whereas, households in owned accommodation in England and Wales found nearly 20% in the year 1918. It has increased drastically up to about 70 % in the year 2001, while in the year 2011, it got slightly decreased to 65%.
The graph illustrates
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accommodation
of
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households
in England and Wales from the
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year
1918 to 2011. The data has
been found
in percentage and it
is calibrated
as
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owned
and rented apartments.

Overall
, the percentage of
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households
in rented
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accommodation
was high as compare to
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
between the
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year
1918 and 2011 in England and Wales, while number of
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owned
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households
increased
dramatically
from the
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year
1918 to 2011.

It is quite
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clear
from the graph that, percentage rate of
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households
in rented
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accommodation
accounted was under 80 % in the
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year
1953. It
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started
decreases until the
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year
1961 of about 70%. After that from the
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year
1953 to 2001, it has
been decreased
up to about 30%. At the
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end
2011, it
was accounted
about 40 %.

Whereas,
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
in England and Wales found
nearly
20% in the
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year
1918. It has increased
drastically
up to about 70 % in the
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year
2001, while in the
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year
2011, it
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got
slightly
decreased to 65%.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates accommodation of households in England and Wales from the year 1918 to 2011. The data has been found in percentage and it is calibrated as owned and rented apartments.

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