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The diagram illustrates the method 9aEb7
The diagram illustrates the method of recycling process for plastic bottles in many steps. The details of each stage will be clarified in the following paragraphs. First and foremost, when people drop a bottle in the trash, the garbage truck will be in charge to collect all of the plastic containers and transport those garbages to the recycling centre. Once the garbages arrive at the factory, it will be brought to the sorting section, where is someone will separate the recyclable bottles from non-recyclable bottles. Then those plastic will be compressed into a square block, dropped into the crushing machine. The next step is the washing process, those small pieces of plastic will be washed. After that, washed plastics are crushed again to be plastic pellets. In the second half processes, the pellets are heated to form raw material, then piling up the raw material to be ready for the production process. This material can be produced goods, such as cloths, reusable bags, food containers and even bottles. Lastly, these products will repeat the same process again.
The diagram illustrates the method of recycling
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for
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plastic
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bottles
in
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many
steps. The
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details
of each stage will
be clarified
in the following paragraphs.

First
and foremost, when
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people
drop a
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bottle
in the trash, the garbage truck will be in charge to collect
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all of the
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plastic
containers and transport those
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garbages
to the recycling
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centre
. Once the
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garbages
arrive at the factory, it will
be brought
to the sorting section, where is someone will separate the recyclable
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bottles
from non-recyclable
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bottles
. Then those
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plastic
will
be compressed
into a square block, dropped into the crushing machine. The
next
step is the washing
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process
, those
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small
pieces of
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plastic
will
be washed
. After that, washed
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plastics
are crushed
again to be
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plastic
pellets.

In the second half
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processes
, the pellets
are heated
to form raw material, then piling up the raw material to be ready for the production
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process
. This material can
be produced
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goods
, such as cloths, reusable bags, food containers and even
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bottles
.
Lastly
, these products will repeat the same
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process
again.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the method

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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