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The bar chart illustrates the proportions of teachers by gender in six divergent educational institutions in the UK, during the period of one year in 2010.

The bar chart illustrates the proportions of teachers by gender in six divergent educational institutions in the UK, during the period of one year in 2010. lbB9
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of teachers by gender in six divergent educational institutions in the UK, during the period of one year in 2010. Overall, there were more female tutors in lower grades. However, male teachers were greater in numbers than the female trainers in higher education level. As is observed from the bar chart, the percentage of women teachers was higher than the men in nursery and primary school ( approximately 90 % and 5 percent respectively). In college, the proportions of tutors from both gender was same, which was 50. Moving to the further details, there was a difference of almost 5 Percent in the numbers of tutors from both gender in secondary school ( 50% female and 45% male). In private training institution 53% men were working as compared to the almost 47% women. 30% ladies and 70% male had job in university.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of teachers by gender in six divergent educational institutions in the UK, during the period of one year in 2010.

Overall
, there were more female tutors in lower grades.
However
, male teachers were greater in numbers than the female trainers in higher education level.

As
is observed
from the bar chart, the percentage of women teachers was higher than the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
in nursery and primary school
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
approximately 90 % and 5 percent
respectively
). In college, the proportions of tutors from both gender was same, which was 50.

Moving to the
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
, there was a difference of almost 5 Percent in the numbers of tutors from both gender in secondary school
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
50% female and 45% male). In private training institution 53%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
were working as compared to the almost 47% women. 30% ladies and 70% male had job in university.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportions of teachers by gender in six divergent educational institutions in the UK, during the period of one year in 2010.

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