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The maps show the development that have taken place in a seaside village from 1995 to present.

The maps show the development that have taken place in a seaside village from 1995 to present. jMyL
The maps show the development that have taken place in a seaside village from 1995 to present. It is clear that a seaside village undergo a dramatic transformation over the period, becoming noticeably less green and more built up. The only places that remaining the same in a seaside village over the period are the housing, the hotel and Cafe. The Farmland and Forest park in the east of a seaside village, for example, were replaced with golf and tennis area, while the housing in the west of village were also made a lots. The housing area in the south close to T-junction enhances for two unit houses and also adding the road direction to the west. Moreover, shop and fish market becoming restaurant and apartments, respectively. Fishing port, located in south of a seaside village and in front of fish market was dissolved, and sea is clean now.
The maps
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the development that have taken place in a seaside
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village
from 1995 to present.

It is
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clear
that a seaside
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village
undergo a dramatic transformation over the period, becoming
noticeably
less green and more built up.

The
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only
places that remaining the same in a seaside
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village
over the period are the housing, the hotel and
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Cafe
. The Farmland and Forest park in the east of a seaside
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village
,
for example
,
were replaced
with golf and tennis area, while the housing in the west of
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village
were
also
made
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a lots
.
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The
housing area in the south close to T-junction enhances for two unit
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houses
and
also
adding the road direction to the west.

Moreover
, shop and fish market becoming restaurant and apartments,
respectively
. Fishing port, located in south of a seaside
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village
and in front of fish market
was dissolved
, and sea is clean
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now
.
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IELTS academic The maps show the development that have taken place in a seaside village from 1995 to present.

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4 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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