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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females who own driving rights in Asian countries in the period of 30 years

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females who own driving rights in Asian countries in the period of 30 years Overall, it can be seen from the chart that numerous women who had the propulsive license were higher than men who passed the driving test. At the top position was the percentage of women’s driving rights in 2000. Regarded as females, the number of women passing their driving test slightly rose to 50 percent in 1990. 2000 witnessed a significant climb in numerous females passing their driving test which reached a peak of 70%. At the end of the period, a moderate fall was seen in the number of women passing their driving test to around 60% in 2010. Turning to men, there was a slight growth by 10% in numerous men owning driving rights in 1990. The number of males owning driving rights dramatically went up to around 40% in 2000. How many men owning driving rights seen a remain stable in 40% in 2010.
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in Asian countries in the period of 30 years

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from the chart that numerous
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who had the propulsive license were higher than
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who passed the
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. At the top position was the percentage of
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in 2000.

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passing their
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slightly
rose to 50 percent in 1990. 2000 witnessed a significant climb in numerous females passing their
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which reached a peak of 70%. At the
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of the period, a moderate fall was
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in the number of
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passing their
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to around 60% in 2010.

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, there was a slight growth by 10% in numerous
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in 1990. The number of males owning
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dramatically
went up to around 40% in 2000. How
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females who own driving rights in Asian countries in the period of 30 years

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