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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people's habit of tea and coffee consumption in five different urben area in Australia.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people's habit of tea and coffee consumption in five different urben area in Australia. w7yWr
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people's habit of tea and coffee consumption in five different urben area in Australia. Overall, went to cafeteria to take a sip of coffee and tea is Australian first choice with the bigest figure in all cities, except for Adelaide and Melbourne tend to be the largest consumption with the relatively highest percentage of buying and brinking of Australian in this area. It is evident that people first choice for a cup of morning drinks is to come to cafe, with the surveyed figures in 4 areas which is Sydney, Melboirne, Brisbane and Horbart being over 50% with the highest is Melbourne at approximately 65%. Instant coffee which often take place in drive-through services and packs coffee also relatively high, which acount for nearly 55% in Brisbane and Melbourne, while the other areas fluctuate between 45% and nearly a half, in Sydney, Melbourne and Adelaide ranged from low to high. Oppositely, buying and drinking habit included fresh coffee more less popular than the other given categories. Brisbane and Adelaide have the lowest percentage in this area with more than a half of city population choosed this. Hobart and these two main economic cities in Australia just acount for nearly 40 % in this surveyed catergory.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
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people
's habit of tea and
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coffee
consumption in five
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different
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urben
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area
in Australia.

Overall
, went to cafeteria to take a sip of
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coffee
and tea is Australian
first
choice with the
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bigest
figure in all cities,
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except for
Adelaide and Melbourne tend to be the largest consumption with the
relatively
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highest
percentage of buying and
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brinking
of Australian in this area.

It is evident that
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people
first
choice for a cup of morning drinks is to
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come
to
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cafe
, with the surveyed figures in 4
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areas
which is Sydney,
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Melboirne
, Brisbane and
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Horbart
being over 50% with the highest is Melbourne at approximately 65%.

Instant
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coffee
which
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often
take place in drive-through services and packs
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coffee
also
relatively
high, which
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acount
for
nearly
55% in Brisbane and Melbourne, while the other
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areas
fluctuate between 45% and
nearly
a half, in Sydney, Melbourne and Adelaide ranged from low to high.

Oppositely
, buying and drinking habit included fresh
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coffee
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more less
popular than the other
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given
categories. Brisbane and Adelaide have the lowest percentage in this
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area
with more than a half of city population
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choosed
this. Hobart and these two main economic cities in Australia
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just
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acount
for
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40 % in this surveyed
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catergory
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people's habit of tea and coffee consumption in five different urben area in Australia.

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