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THE TABLE SHOWS RESULT OF TWO SURVEYS DONE IN 1980 ABD 2010 IN VARIOUS ASPECTS OF CITY IN DELHI , UNITS ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTAGE.

THE TABLE SHOWS RESULT OF TWO SURVEYS DONE IN 1980 ABD 2010 IN VARIOUS ASPECTS OF CITY IN DELHI, UNITS ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTAGE. mXMLN
THE TABLE CHART ILLUSTRATES CONSEQUENCE OF TWO SURVEYS OVER 30 YEAR FROM 1980 TO 2010 ON SIX ASPECTS ( EDUCATION, HEALTH CARE, ENVIRONMENT, SHOPS, EMPLOYMENT AND TRANSPORT) IN DELHI. THE UNIT ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTILE. OVERALL, THE FEEDBACK AS GOOD IS THE HIGHEST RATING FOR ALL ASPECT REGARLESS OF PERIOD AND FOLLOWS DOWNWARD TREND WHEREAS, NIETHER GOOD OR BAD AND ONLY BAD FACED AN UPWARD TREND. IT CAN BECLEALRY SEEN THAT, THE RATING OF BEST FOR STUDIES AND JOBS EXPERIENCED AN DRACTIC INCLINE BY 10% IN 2010. FOR HEALTH IT IS ACCOUNTED FOR 82% AND FALLS TO 74% IN FINAL SPAN. ENVIRONMENT AND SHOPS STEADILY DECREASES OVER THE GIVEN PERIOD OF TIME. FINALLY, THE TRANSPORTATION FALLS BY 13% IN 2010. THE TABLE CHART FURTHER COLLATE, NOT GOOD OR BAD FOR EDCUATION AND HABITAT FACED DRASCTIC DECLINE OF 12% AND 13% RESPECTIVELY WHEREAS, HOSPITAL AND TRAVELS SHOWS INCLINE FROM 10% AND 16% TO 14% AND 23% ACCORDINGLY, THE PERCENTAGE OF SHOPS REMAINED CONSTANT LASTLY, EMPLOYMENT DELCINES BY 17 %. MEANWHILE, RATING AS WORST FOR EDUCATION AND HEALTH SHOWS A SIMILAR INCREMENT OF 4%, ENVIRONMENT IS ACCOUNTED FOR 6% WORST RATED AND IT SKYROCKETED TO 16% IN 2010 WHILE, JOBS INCLINE BY 13% IN 30 YEARS. AS FAR AS TRAVEL IS CONCERNED IT FACED AN INCREMENT BY 6%.
THE TABLE CHART ILLUSTRATES CONSEQUENCE OF TWO SURVEYS OVER 30 YEAR FROM 1980 TO 2010 ON SIX ASPECTS
(
EDUCATION, HEALTH CARE, ENVIRONMENT, SHOPS, EMPLOYMENT AND TRANSPORT) IN DELHI. THE UNIT
ARE MEASURED
IN PERCENTILE.

OVERALL
, THE FEEDBACK AS
GOOD
IS THE HIGHEST RATING FOR ALL ASPECT
REGARLESS
OF PERIOD AND FOLLOWS DOWNWARD TREND WHEREAS,
NIETHER
GOOD
OR
BAD
AND
ONLY
BAD
FACED AN UPWARD TREND.

IT CAN
BECLEALRY
SEEN
THAT, THE RATING OF BEST FOR STUDIES AND JOBS EXPERIENCED AN
DRACTIC
INCLINE BY 10% IN 2010. FOR HEALTH IT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 82% AND FALLS TO 74% IN FINAL SPAN. ENVIRONMENT AND SHOPS
STEADILY
DECREASES OVER THE
GIVEN
PERIOD OF TIME.
FINALLY
, THE TRANSPORTATION FALLS BY 13% IN 2010.

THE TABLE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE, NOT
GOOD
OR
BAD
FOR
EDCUATION
AND HABITAT FACED
DRASCTIC
DECLINE OF 12% AND 13%
RESPECTIVELY
WHEREAS, HOSPITAL AND TRAVELS
SHOWS
INCLINE FROM 10% AND 16% TO 14% AND 23%
ACCORDINGLY
, THE PERCENTAGE OF SHOPS REMAINED CONSTANT
LASTLY
, EMPLOYMENT
DELCINES
BY 17 %. MEANWHILE, RATING AS WORST FOR EDUCATION AND HEALTH
SHOWS
A SIMILAR INCREMENT OF 4%, ENVIRONMENT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 6%
WORST
RATED AND IT SKYROCKETED TO 16% IN 2010 WHILE, JOBS INCLINE BY 13% IN 30 YEARS. AS FAR AS TRAVEL
IS CONCERNED
IT FACED AN INCREMENT BY 6%.

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