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Writing Task 1. The diagram shows the process by which coffee is made in a French Press. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words. USE THE PASSIVE VOICE.

Writing Task 1. The diagram shows the process by which coffee is made in a French Press. 7P6ry
The flow-chart illustrates the method of making coffee in a French Press. Each picture represents a stage in the process of making coffee, there are 6 stages to this process. First, the lid needs to be removed. Then, a teaspoon of coffee beans is put into the pot. Next, hot water is poured over the ground coffee beans. As soon as boiling water is poured in, the pot should be covered with a lid and waited for a while. After the hot water is turned coffee colour, the strainer needs to be pushed down to keep the beans at the bottom of the pot. Finally, a pot of coffee has been prepared to enjoy. In conclusion, this simple process shows how coffee is made in a French press and it is easy if you follow the steps above.
The flow-chart illustrates the method of making
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coffee
in a French Press. Each picture represents a stage in the process of making
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coffee
, there are 6 stages to this process.
First
, the lid needs to
be removed
. Then, a teaspoon of
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coffee
beans
is put
into the
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pot
.
Next
, hot water
is poured
over the ground
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coffee
beans. As
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soon
as boiling water
is poured
in, the
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pot
should
be covered
with a lid and waited for a while. After the hot water
is turned
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coffee
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colour
, the strainer needs to
be pushed
down to
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keep
the beans at the bottom of the
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pot
.
Finally
, a
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pot
of
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coffee
has
been prepared
to enjoy.
In conclusion
, this simple process
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shows
how
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coffee
is made
in a French press and it is easy if you follow the steps above.
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IELTS academic Writing Task 1. The diagram shows the process by which coffee is made in a French Press.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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