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the bar chart illustrates the number of enquiries in person soared significantly six months

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The line graph illustrates how many enquiries Tourist Information office in one city by phone, letter and in person from January to June in 2011. In January 2011, more than 800 enquiries were received by letters or emails while enquiries by telephone were less than 800. In in January, the_least amount of enquiries was in person, the number of enquiries in person soared significantly six months and in June, the highest number of enquiries was in person accounting for more than 1800. Surprisingly, the number of enquiries by letter and email dropped gradually over the next two months which was followed by a sharp decrease in next three months becoming the lowest in June, reducing to less than 400. The number of enquiries by telephone slightly slipped in February which was followed by a marginal rise in the next couple of months. Over the next three months, there was a significant increase in telephone enquiries which rose to 1600.
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Tourist Information office in one city by phone, letter and in
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from January to June in 2011.

In January 2011, more than 800
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enquiries
were received
by letters or emails while
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enquiries
by telephone were less than 800.
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was in
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, the
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of
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in
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soared
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six
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and in June, the highest
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of
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was in
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accounting for more than 1800.

Surprisingly
, the
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of
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by letter and email dropped
gradually
over the
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two
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months
which
was followed
by a sharp decrease in
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three
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becoming the lowest in June, reducing to less than 400. The
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of
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enquiries
by telephone
slightly
slipped in February which
was followed
by a marginal rise in the
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. Over the
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three
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, there was a significant increase in telephone
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enquiries
which rose to 1600.
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