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Living alone or in small family units

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In the widest sense, living alone or in small family units brings people enormous advantages and this is also the reason why people, especially youngsters, prefer doing it today. By living alone or in nuclear families, they can avoid financial burden usually caused by paying for exorbitant living costs of family members. Specifically when living alone, one can learn basic skills, pay the utility bills on one’s own and this turns them into self-dependent individuals which would contribute to the development of an entire country in a broader sense. The idea of living alone or in small families can facilitates a full possession of autonomy over our lives by making room for our improvement and our being free to do whatever we like, especially women, when their growth space has always been jammed by the orthodox view that women should do everything for their families.
In the widest sense,
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units brings
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enormous advantages and this is
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people
,
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today
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or in nuclear
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families
, they can avoid financial burden
usually
caused by paying for exorbitant
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living
costs of
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family
members.
Specifically
when
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living
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alone
, one can learn basic
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skills
, pay the utility bills on one’s
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own
and this turns them into self-dependent individuals which would contribute to the development of an entire country in a broader sense. The
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idea
of
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living
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alone
or in
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small
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families
can facilitates a full possession of autonomy over our
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lives
by making room for our improvement and our being free to do whatever we like,
especially
women, when their growth space has always
been jammed
by the orthodox view that women should do everything for their
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IELTS academic Living alone or in small family units

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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