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Bar chart - a survey in Australia about coffee and tea and drinking habits

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of a survey which was about the amount of beverage is bought by the society, namely coffee and tea and drinking habits in Sydney, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. Overall, in all mentioned cities almost the percentage of going to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 week is occupied the most, while the proportion of purchasing fresh coffee in this period is presented the least. First, as can be seen from the chart Melbourne and Hobart both attained around 63% of the society in terms of going to cafes which were higher than adjacent cities. Yet, this amount for Sydney was 2% lower than these cities (61%). Also, Brisbane and Adelaide reached the lowest proportion in this field just around 55%, and 49%, respectively. Furthermore, Hobart, similarly, represents the highest percentage in the field of buying instant coffee which was a bit higher than half of the crowd around 54%, while Brisbane attained the approximate percentage of about 52%. Moreover, Adelaide's proportion in this field was roughly the same as mankind are. went to a cafe around 50% which was higher than Melbourne and Sydney that each one is constituted 48%, and 45% respectively. Nevertheless, the proportion of purchasing fresh coffee, in contrary, was the least in all cities. Bristol and Adelaide attained the least amount just about 34% for both of them, which was almost a third of the crowd. Although Sydney accounted for the most around 44%, other cities, namely Melbourne and Hobart reached 42% and 38%, respectively.

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Nevertheless
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