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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries. City Date opened Kilometres of route Passengers

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries. City Date opened Kilometres of route Passengers 96BWW
In 6 different Nations, the given table chart below provides information about the underground railway systems In London, in 1863, it can be observed that the kilometres of route, which was the highest, accounted to be 394 and passengers per year was 775 million. In paris and Tokyo, in the year 1900 and 1927, the kilometres of route, which was between 150 and 200 and passengers per year that was noticed to be between 1100 and 2000 million. Coming to kyoto, in 1981, the kilometres of route, which was the lowest not only in kilometres but also passengers per year, accounting for 11 and 45 million. Eventually, in Washington DC and Los Angeles, in the year 1976 and 2001, the kilometres of route, which was considered to be 126 and 28, passengers per year that was noticing for 144 million and 50 million. Overall, from the 6 distinct countries, Kyoto was lower than others in the year 1981.
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table chart below provides information about the underground railway systems

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1900 and 1927, the
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, accounting for 11 and 45 million.
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1976 and 2001, the
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that was noticing for 144 million and 50 million.

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1981.
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